Section Annotations

Courtney: Bin's images included annotations (potentially his own) that were both analytical and at times critical -- I was particularly drawn to one annotation highlighting a weak metaphor. Since the author of the text was also an undergrad I wondered if he possibly knew the author or had edited their work. Regardless, I think that the images attached here show how useful it can be to have previously-owned and annotated copies of texts. The critical annotation exposes the current reader to potentially criticism and makes the text more approachable. In the future, these annotations (especially the one referencing specific historical figures) would provide helpful historical context. 

Julianna: What an interesting book! I am particularly interested in some of the context that's missing–correct me if I'm wrong, but didn't you say that your friend wrote this book? At the very least, I definitely see that some of your annotations are editing suggestions. Perhaps your text would benefit from an explanation behind its creation: what inspired the author to write about divorce, soldiers, and smiles? (Also, as a sidenote, you might want to consider switching to a webtheme that makes zooming in a bit easier. The current image viewing window is a bit narrow.)